A4: Poster

This above is the first draft of my poster. My poster aims to promote active ageing lifestyle to senior citizens by encouraging them to spend more time with their children/grandchildren. I think this is a worthwile cause as this lifestyle is healthy for them and at the same time will help improve their relationship with their families.
The downside of this is someone critiqued this and said that from the poster, the aim is not really obvious. I thought the pictures alone can somehow relate the aim but unfortunately this is not so. So many people suggest that I write an extra brief description, like a brief text on the poster to reiterate the aims and make it clearer to all.